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 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）1． 说明事物现状2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法     Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily Generally, its advantages can be seen as First ----------------(A的优点之一) Besides -------------------（A的优点之二）　But every coin has two The negative aspects are also One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．   Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)04：大学英语四级作文模板：现象解释型作文模板：Recently, ＿＿＿＿What amazes us most is＿＿＿＿＿．It is true that ＿＿＿＿＿　There are many reasons explaining ＿＿＿＿＿＿．The main reason is＿＿＿＿＿ ，What is more, ＿＿＿＿＿，Thirdly, ＿＿＿＿＿．As a 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